Showing posts with label mind fields. Show all posts
Showing posts with label mind fields. Show all posts

Monday, June 18, 2012

Look at page 120 in your current wip then...

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Today I'm posting the last paragraph on page 120 of my current wip. This site is open to all ages, please keep that in mind when posting your passage. Thanks, Marian


Mated for Life, A Jake Carrington Mystery, book three.


     He opened his mouth to apologize. Taking a step toward the bed, he stopped short, changed his mind. What was her problem anyway? She was close enough to the phone to have heard the conversation. He didn’t need two hundred questions first thing in the morning. This was why he previously avoided relationships. They were mind fields waiting to explode.